Thursday, 19 January 2012

(9) Pantoum

Bullying

I wish I could disapear
Because it hurts when they call you names
And I'm only filled with fear
They make it look like a bunch of games
Becuse it hurts when they call you names
They punch and kick and you don't know what to do
They make it look like a bunch of games
I just wish I could start a new
They punch and kick and you don't know what to do
I see people all around standing and staring
I just wish I could start a new
I don't think that there's many people in the world who are caring
I see people all around standing and staring
And I'm only filled with fear
I don't think that there's many people in the world who are caring
I wish I could disapear.



Inspiration: Bullying happens almost at every school so I decided to do a poem on bullying to show people how someone would feel if they were bullied.

4 comments:

  1. I love all of these poems so it was hard to pick one but this is my favourite! It's very expressive and intimate and I like how you used different colours to represent bullying.

    -Helena

    ps. your blog layout is really cool

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  2. I like the ending it goes well with the rest of the poem. I like how you describe the actions of the bystanders, what the bully (ies) do and how the victim feels. Very good.

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  3. I like how you make it sound like you are alone and that people see what's going on but they do nothing to stop it.

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  4. i like how its from the point of view of the victim and how you wish others would help but they just stare this one was my favourite

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