Shakespearean Sonnet
My school is full of people who tell lies,
They show their school spirit but no respect,
Some kids have lockers full of dirt and flies,
They're so grubby I need to disinfect,
The school's a rip off and kids brag a lot,
Some staff members are mean and they spit talk,
Most students are rude and want to boycott,
But what can you do, just sit there and mock,
Some people's breaths aren't pleasant for it reeks,
They try to make school cool, but I'm no fool,
It's not like this school is built of just freaks,
But there's some decent people in this school,
I know I may sound harsh but it's the truth,
But hey I'm here, I might as well hold ruth.
Inspiration: My school. Before I wrote this poem I didn't necessarily want to insult my school I just wanted to show people the faults and negative points of the school and a way we can solve the problems and such but I kind of got carried away and I got so in to writing the negative points that I didn't include any positive points and before I knew it I had written too much but I thought it was a good poem (in terms of the rhymes) so I didn't want to change it.
ps. If I insulted anyone with this poem than I'm very sorry.
I really like this one. I'm not sure why .... I like how you're saying the truth :)
ReplyDeleteI don't really get the last line though o.O
All off your poems are very well written. This one kind of spoke to me because almost anyone can relate to it.
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